blaze
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Yeah im a freakin regigigas,absol,salamence and sceptile hybrid. SO WHAT!!!???
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Post by blaze on Mar 23, 2010 16:12:04 GMT -5
oh and anyone who is a skilled drawer, i would like to see Alex and Luna drawn, The information is pretty much there for Alex but Luna may be a bit more of a challenge, use your imagination Blaze ^_^''
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Post by ved on Mar 26, 2010 22:57:20 GMT -5
I'll try drawing them. (pencil sketch though)
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blaze
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Post by blaze on Mar 27, 2010 5:18:23 GMT -5
yay, thanks ved, just post in your fan page, when done
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Post by blaze on Mar 27, 2010 15:40:48 GMT -5
a 12 year olds depiction of Luna ^^ drawn by my cousin Attachments:
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Post by ved on Mar 27, 2010 17:34:30 GMT -5
Hmm, not bad. Looks a lot like Sandy... I'd suggest a better camera or scaner, but at least I have something to work with now. Other than his sword, is there anything Alex wears specifically? (or hair, cause for now he has Roxas's hair style )
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blaze
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Post by blaze on Mar 28, 2010 6:27:03 GMT -5
lol he says thanks, oh and Alex has hair a bit like paulo's, the rest is in the story
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blaze
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Post by blaze on Mar 28, 2010 13:56:16 GMT -5
Chapter 10, I want answers!!!
Alex sat on the floor asuming the pose of a prisoner in a cell, with his guitar on 1 knee, strumming new tunes to record. He was absorbed in his task and was startled when a knock sounded on the door. he jumped, but slowly got to his feet and trudged to the door, he opened it to find the same orange furred ragdoll/begal hybrid that he had spoke to the night before.
"Tess, was it Tess?" Alex asked as the orange furred hybrid walked through to the sitting room, a small grin on her face. "Alex." She smiled, her brown eyes twinkling with curiosity."You sat with us at the beginning of school. But I want to know who exactly you are." This seemed to hurt Alex. "I could ask you the same thing." He replied coldly. Tess felt bad for that and panicked. "Oh I didn't mean to be rude, im sorry!" She stood up. "I'm sorry, i should leave."
"No it's ok, sit." Alex said. "I always knew people would get curious!" He smiled. He stood up and walked to the kitchen. The room was had a dark blue colouration to it, and the tiles on the floor looked very intricate. Alex walked to his fridge, opened it, and pulled out two bottles of soda. He handed one to Tess and sat down. "You may want to sit down, it's a long story."
"It all started 8 or nine years ago." Alex started "I lived in this city before.It was kindergarten and I was forced into playing alone, all the other kids rejected me." He tried to hold back a tear. "But then i saw Lucy sitting alone playing with a toy car." Alex pushed hair out of his eye. "I walked over and asked if I could play with her. She simply stared at me though, it was funny how even though she seemed to be upset and alone she refused to let me play."
"Ah I see." Tess said taking a sip of her soda. "What happened next?" Alex opened the lid of his bottle and fumbled around with the lid. "Well I saw Lucy after school walking home, but there was a kid on a skateboard, another Manx, and he was hurtling towards Lucy!" Alex took a sip of his soda. "Well I kinda did what anyone in that position would have done, I ran over to Lucy and dragged her out of the way." Tess opened her mouth slightly, but when her diagonally scraggled hair went in her mouth, she blew it out and shut it again. Alex stood up and stretched his back. "I suppose you want to know about my ear as well."
Tess hadn't thought about Alex's ear, but when she looked at it, it did look quite mysterious, "Yeah, I saw it looks a bit...Odd." Alex's left ear was black (so was the lower half of his right leg) And looked like it had half of it bitten off, the fur on the inside of his ear had a reddish tint to it. "Well if it wasn't for these 4 people i may have died!"
Tess's eyes opened widely. "What!?" She exclaimed! Alex put his hand on her shoulder. "Calm down, its ok now." Tess sighed, then looked put the window. "Well could you please explain how?" She then looked back at Alex, awaiting his reply. "Well its a short story really, I was walking through a park when some dog asks me what the time was, i pull out my mobile to check, and i was punched in the face. I start fighting back and winning, but he calls a load of others. They overpowered me and one tore at my ear. But then 4 kind strangers come over and beat the living daylight out of them!"
This chapter may clear up a bit of Alex's past and open the door for Suri, Jack and ved to appear ^^
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Post by ved on Mar 30, 2010 18:23:49 GMT -5
Wow, wonder when that fight was. Also, I got your pics done, I'll upload them soon.
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Post by blaze on Apr 4, 2010 15:54:39 GMT -5
Chapter 11, Grand Theft Bedroom
Skillfully, Luna swung her rucksac around to her front, opened it and pulled out a lockpick. She swung the rucksac back onto her shoulder and started to squeeze the pick between the lock. the window swung open and slammed Luna in the face. Her legs loosened off the drainpipe and she reflexively grabbed the top of the opened window. "Phew" She sighed in relief as she hoisted herself up into the room.
Surprisingly, Lucys' bedroom was quite simple. The room held nothing of value on first sight,obviously, so Luna started to poor through the drawers and cupboards, she found a round comb and tossed it on the floor, unfortunately she found nothing too valuable besides a couple of dollars in her underwear drawer. "Odd." Luna whispered to herself as she continued searching, "thud", Luna dropped her bag. "Shit!" She gasped!
Luna heard footsteps on the steps, thud, thud, thud after every footfall. She panicked and jumped backwards, her foot catching the comb and sending her tumbling backwards towards the open window! She reflexively ripped off the knife from her ankle and tried to stab it into the wall, but to no avail! She was going to fall to her death!
Her bag had got caught on ther other leg as she had started to fall but this made no difference at all. she closed her eyes and waited for everything to suddenly cut out on her. Her life started to flash before her eyes, her childhood memories, her first crush and how she was caught up in a bank robbery. Her first kiss and her move to Cabarosa, oh what a good town it had been to her, so many rich people. Luna smiled then realised why she had her eyes closed, and started to sob.
Luna suddenly felt a hard force strike her on the backside and back. And she clenched her teeth and expected to feel a cut somewhere and blood gushing out, but nothing happened. She slowly opened her eyes and to her surprise, saw the face of a yellow and black stripy felis silvetris, his face was straining somewhat and it looked like he was finding it hard to hold her up.
"Shit." Luna said rubbing her back. "God what is it with people and touching me up!?" The cat gaped his jaw. "Well thats a nice way of thanking me for SAVING YOUR LIFE!!!" then released his grip on her backside. "You gonna get up?" Luna pushed herself to her feet. "Thanks." She said gingerly. "I'm Luna, and you are..." "...Jack. Nice to meet you Luna." Jack replied "You have a cut elbow." He noted. "Lets go get this cleaned up."
Jack took Luna's hand and started running towards one of the surrounding houses, Luna bent forward and broke into a sprint just to match his pace, they eventually reached a house, it was decorated with plant pots on both sides of the porch. Jack knocked on the door and very swiftly the door was opened by a red/orange siberian tiger. The smile on her face was as wide as the ocean. She looked at Jack and said. "Hiya Jack, who's this?" She then looked at Luna and saw her elbow and the smile faded. "Oh, come in. I have a first aid kit somewhere."
The girl led Luna through a room that looked like it could be used in movies. The floor had a bright red carpet and the walls were a dark blue with clouds painted on. There was a boy sitting on the sofa, he had an uptwisting horn on his forehead, which was uncommon for the people in Cabarosa as they were all either cats or dogs. Luna felt herself staring at him and quickly averted her gaze, but she still saw him curve his mouth into an awkward smile.
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Post by ved on Apr 4, 2010 20:26:32 GMT -5
Heh, funny how Jack happened to be around when Luna almost fell out. (and how Luna reacts back) You got their personalities pretty accurately.
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blaze
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Post by blaze on Apr 5, 2010 6:41:51 GMT -5
thanks, I spent a lot of extra time on this chapter. It was hard to write about a near death experience obviously ^^ and did i seriously get them right? Wow thats cool Cant have Luna dying now can we Ved XD On a different note now, I am open to suggestions about how the story should go. Just pm them to me. Or send them to alexblues@hotmail.co.uk
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Post by jay on Apr 9, 2010 22:49:26 GMT -5
Its an interesting take on a "could be" scenario. I've considered myself the possibility that Sandy might be keeping secrets from Mike, because she doesn't want to hurt him.
Its a good story, and you tell it well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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